The whole world knew that this was coming, and very few people prepared.
The premise for this story is fantastic, and it has alot of potential. It could easily become a book.
A few things:
His wife's best friend was ...
The man was worried too, about his fiance who had ...
Decide her status. Also, each dialogue line should be marked as such and given its own indent/paragraph.
The premise for this story is fantastic, and it has alot of potential. It could easily become a book.
A few things:
His wife's best friend was ...
The man was worried too, about his fiance who had ...
Decide her status. Also, each dialogue line should be marked as such and given its own indent/paragraph.